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One More Day
Contributed by
ForeverAlone
on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 07:09:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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One more day
As time slips away
Blemishing a dream
As life as a nightmare
Gleams
One more day
As life bleeds grey
Scatching the mirror
As you want it all to come
Clearer
One more day
Death, you cannot keep at bay
Tearing down the walls
Crumbleing down as you
Crawl
One more day
Is all I ask of you
But I know my cries are in vein
Your red blood will turn blue
Along with your face,
The color of rain
This being the letter you left, tied up in red lace
You end your pain
As I kick the chair from under my feet
My neck snaps
My tounge wraps
And all the sights around
Fade
And finally, my destiny
Is Clear
...
I will not live One More Day
In Fear
...
Copyright ©
ForeverAlone
... [
2005-03-15 19:09:08]
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Re: One More Day
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 07:23:33 PM AEST
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| wow that was deep, i liked that 1 |
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Re: One More Day
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 07:45:56 PM AEST
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| These would be perfect lyrics to scream out in say a slipknot style song. Very good. |
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Re: One More Day
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by sweet_lil_b2003 on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 08:23:53 PM AEST
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hey i must say your a amazing writter i couldnt of worded anything better myself. ~~Crystal~~
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Re: One More Day
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 09:05:42 PM AEST
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| Awesome write. I really enjoyed reading this piece. |
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Re: One More Day
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 09:19:11 PM AEST
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| ::claps hands:: yay, not nice. dark and amazing. =]] loved this one clark. lovely ending. (not lovely, but original...) others need to learn to use their brain to be have as original. |
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