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Pretty Eyes That Bleed
Contributed by
Sirena_Degana
on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 07:07:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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can you hear my failing heartbeat,
Liar
Liar
I Love You....
your human body is divine with a truth that was never mine.
a scabbed face,
and a forgotten mind.
a troubled child,
and a pretty lie...
i doubt that these tears will ever cease,
to fly on butterflies wings, and fairy fly to a deceased moment.
i remain a tapestry on the wall, with running oils.
covered with dust, and the specks of your last will.
truth be told, i remain unforgiven.
it's always me,
once again,
i can forgive and forget.
one respected decision,
and a last forgotten wish.
the one that last stands reads the fingerprints in the sand,
the forgotten story of a broken man...
"it's just too bad you were beautiful,
too bad your not here,
pick up the broken pieces,
now,
if you care"
[and the world spreads its legs for another ******* star] -MM
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Re: Pretty Eyes That Bleed
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by Deleterious_Dislike on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 07:59:17 PM AEST
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Im in tears through this..It may also be the background music ive chosen.
An instrumental/acoustic version of A Perfect Circles '3 Libras'
5 out of 5* x |
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Re: Pretty Eyes That Bleed
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by sweet_lil_b2003 on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 08:28:57 PM AEST
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| liked your poem its deep and meaningful ~~Crystal~~ |
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Re: Pretty Eyes That Bleed
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by sweet_lil_b2003 on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 08:28:58 PM AEST
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| liked your poem its deep and meaningful ~~Crystal~~ |
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Re: Pretty Eyes That Bleed
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by HellsLibrarian on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 09:36:19 PM AEST
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| you write some powerful stuff. "the fingerprints in the sand/the forgotten story of a broken man" is one of my favorite parts, very evocative. |
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