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Absolute zero
Contributed by
Urizen
on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 06:18:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Stretched skin and the smell of burning,
a hole appears
then silence,
a door opens.
Whatever you have come to expect,
whatever you want to do;
there is nothing that can stop you.
Just your futile, pointless, imagination.
What good am I?
I feel like I'm slipping away,
but this guilt erodes away at me,
and every second
death creeps upon me
like a cool, callous hand in this abattoir world.
I sit and watch the water overflow
the chill of it on naked skin breathes new life.
A puddle forms,
and lines that I just can't say
trickle into the emptiness.
Copyright ©
Urizen
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2005-03-15 18:18:44]
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Re: Absolute zero
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by Eve on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 06:50:04 PM AEST
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Beautiful imagery, but with an unpleasant tone that just kept me shivering.
This speaks volumes, I think.
-Eve. |
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Re: Absolute zero
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by Floo on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 08:56:48 AM AEST
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| beautiful... incredibly mind blowingly beautiful!!! |
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