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Your city
Contributed by
havi
on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 04:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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There will be tinkling of anklets,
There will be thunder claps of thunderbolt,
O my beloved! I think , in your city,
All the people must be beautiful.
Copyright ©
havi
... [
2002-12-17 16:00:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Your city
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 04:27:11 PM AEST (User
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This is a beautiful poem, what city are you speaking of it has my curiosity?...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Your city
(User Rating: 1 ) by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 10:31:47 PM AEST (User
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I wish I lived in that city! Good one! Christina |
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Re: Your city
(User Rating: 1 ) by havi on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 03:39:05 AM AEST (User
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hi dear !
thanx for liking my poem.
my name is saeed, havi is my nick.im 22 m.
i belong to Sindh province of Pakistan.
would u like to introduce yourself?
i will be waiting for your reply.
yours
saeed havi
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Re: Your city
(User Rating: 1 ) by havi on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 03:48:18 AM AEST (User
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dear oreo
in my poem "your city" i m talking about my beloved's city "sehwan Sharif" which is situated in Sindh province of Pakistan.
i hope your curiousity will be averted now.
thanx for liking my poetry.
yours
saeed havi
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Re: Your city
(User Rating: 1 ) by havi on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 03:54:04 AM AEST (User
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dear oreo
in my poem "your city" i m talking about my beloved's city "sehwan Sharif" which is situated in Sindh province of Pakistan.
i hope your curiousity will be averted now.
thanx for liking my poetry.
yours
saeed havi
(saeedhavi@hotmail.com) |
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