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AdViCe To A FriEnD
Contributed by
gina
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Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 03:40:00 PM in AEST
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To express yourself ,it's the best way
you can do it during the night or day
Anywhere,in your bed or at kitchen floor
Never satisfied,you'll ask for more
Cheapest way to bring the joy
You'll like it,trust me,don't be coy
Work of art,affection and sensation
Marking a position,creating communication
Calming down,relaxing,when in bad mood
Giving from the heart you must and should
Different styles ,all tastes satisfied
World of expresssions,sweet,wise or wild
About my first try,O don't ask
Nice,long , but tiring task
When you get used to it,you know
You'll make it better,proud to show
When all done,from pleasure you'll leap
then tired,in seconds you'll fall asleep
Wish i can tell everyone and show 'em
that nothing feels better than writing a poem
Copyright ©
gina
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2002-12-17 15:40:00]
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Re: AdViCe To A FriEnD
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 04:25:23 PM AEST
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This is so beautifully written gina and it has such a beautiful message behind it.....it's true sometimes nothing feels better than writing a poem....i enjoyed this alot thanks for sharing it...
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Re: AdViCe To A FriEnD
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 10:35:06 PM AEST
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| Good advice! Yes writing a poem is good medicine to the soul! Christina |
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Re: AdViCe To A FriEnD
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by Opium on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 08:32:25 AM AEST
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| Writing a poem maybe does feel good as you've so beautifully described, but living them is even greater :P |
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