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gave you my heart
Contributed by
Formerly_known
on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 10:01:48 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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you told me you loved me
told me i was ur one
told me it was forever no matter what
and i gave you my heart
you promised me i find no other girl
but that was a lie
told me u didnt care what people said
so i gave you my heart
I gave you my heart and you tore it to peices
thought i was your one and only but
i was your mistress
i hate you and i hope that she does to you
what you did to me... but i have to thank you
if you hadnt done to me what you did
i would have never met my one true soul
mate
so thank you and rot in hell
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Re: gave you my heart
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 10:31:45 AM AEST
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| Wow...this guy sounds like a really big jerk, but at least you found someone else great job hun |
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Re: gave you my heart
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by lostinmyself on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 10:37:02 AM AEST
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Ouch.
You don't need him, it sounds like he doesn't deserve you.
Good you found someone else.
Good write, you need to look at your grammar a little bit though, maybe capitalise some words.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: gave you my heart
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by Mangs on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 02:01:17 PM AEST
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| woah...the anger...nice write dear |
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