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These Words Unspoken

Contributed by BloodsINK on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 05:14:03 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

these words unspoken,
yet i understand,
from the second you closed your hand,
it hurts when you can just let go,
and when all i need to know is,
that tomorrow well be ok
that tomorrow is another day
that you'll love me, forgive this mistake
give me another reason, for another step to take

holding strong, i pretend I'm fine,
with every word unspoken,these emotion felt times
tears build in my eyes, like rivers flow
and I'm wondering if this love,
is something you can just let go,

you've never hurt me, yet i can see we've changed,
and I'm dieing, but were still the same,
your still everything i need
your still everything i want
i just can't let go, when your all I've got

I've lived my life , surrounded by you
4months 3Weeks 4Day's
my heart( I ) need you in so many ways,
but... what am i ment to do , when i fear you've already gone,
these words unspoken,
just waiting for your voice,
just one word i wish you'd speak
with one straight answer, that doesn't make me weak,
all i need to know...
baby that you wont let go.. *I LOVE YOU*
these words unspoken

Copyright © BloodsINK ... [ 2005-03-15 05:14:03]
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Re: These Words Unspoken (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 09:26:39 AM AEST
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Great Job...before my boyfriend past away I used to write poems like this 2, it's a great way to get out what you feel...and I thought it was really good!
-Steph

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