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Moment's Decay
Contributed by
waos
on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 12:00:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Watch as raindrops fade
and cry these lonely tears of jade.
Learned too late how words can kill,
learned to hate your every thrill.
Lonely cries to lonely
to catch my tear's blue pain.
Screams give way to sobbing
despite all efforts to contain.
Unchain my demons to eat away,
surrender to the moment's decay.
Seek weak metaphors to explain,
cry uniqueness in this stain.
Leave me here in silence,
you won't hear the blame in this voice.
Don't feel regret when memory fades,
there's no reason not to rejoice.
Copyright ©
waos
... [
2005-03-15 00:00:58]
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Re: Moment's Decay
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 12:13:28 AM AEST
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wow i really like this piece.
Dark very dark.
great write. |
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Re: Moment's Decay
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 12:20:27 AM AEST
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Awesome sounded even cooler when I read
it aloud. I loved the title as well it really stuck
out well. Yeah this is awesome Kara it flowed
really well. I hope you are feeling better after
writing this.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Moment's Decay
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 01:27:41 AM AEST
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Very sad but written well.
thanks for your comments on my work.
Luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Moment's Decay
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 05:46:33 PM AEST
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Rhythm flows beautifully.
Enjoyed it Kara.
Thanks for sharing
Elizabeth |
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Re: Moment's Decay
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 07:40:23 PM AEST
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Something lovely about
the pureness of the atmosphere
and emotions you
evoke in this.
Unspoiled.
--Ghosty |
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