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Invisible
Contributed by
anonymussme
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Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 11:51:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Days later the tears still come
She wonders if the pain will ever be done
At the time, she felt ripped in two
Now she feels shattered, her happiness overdue
People seem to be staring, she�s not sure at what
It�s not at her clothes, their mouths are kept shut
She imagines that it shows, by looking at her face
But no one has asked, no one has embraced
On one hand she�s glad, it happened to her
Not to some little girl, did this dread occur
She would never wish this pain, on anyone other
Not a father, a mother, a sister, or brother
On the other hand, it hurts to this enormous degree
No one understands, but they can�t disagree
The pain inside is ripping her apart
From her body, her soul departs
Two days later, some feelings have changed
Holding the secret inside, she�s becoming deranged
Not one person has noticed, the cuts on her arms
No one�s felt the need, to sound the alarms
Her make-up is running, she hasn�t showered in days
Her hair is all matted, and going every which way
She�s beginning to think she can�t really be seen
She�s invisible now, at the age of sixteen
Even at home, he parents don�t say a word
Silence is what she usually preferred
But they used to talk, and carry on so
This muteness only started one week ago
She�s become invisible, it must be true
As this girl she is now, she�s made her debut
But there was no one to watch, no one to see
The change she made, to this absentee
xMONIQUE MARIEx
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2005-03-14 23:51:30]
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Re: Invisible
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by waos on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 12:02:59 AM AEST
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Wow, that's really sad. It's got that childlike sound to it. I'm sorry if it's
you that went through that. Good write.
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Re: Invisible
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by xtremcalibur on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 04:44:46 AM AEST
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| I found beauty in this poem. One can take this a couple of ways. I have chosen one. I never thought something like that could be put into words so beautifully. Good write. |
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