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Breaking Wood
Contributed by
b_rand
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Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 11:09:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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A liquor bottles lies shattered on the floor.
Children bear crying faces, hiding beneath the covers
Fear and anger mix together in a raging soupbowl.
This is the end of an era, of a group.
This is the last fight.
There are no more chances.
And please don't beg, child, don't make this worse.
As if this isn't hard enough on the victim.
He wants it to last. To continue.
But it will not.
His face will become shattered.
The love has dissipated.
Our home has been broken.
Copyright ©
b_rand
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2005-03-14 23:09:35]
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Re: Breaking Wood
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by waos on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 12:05:10 AM AEST
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That's sad. Good job writing and describing it. Wish I had more to say.
Nice job.
~Waos/Kara |
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Re: Breaking Wood
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 12:43:48 AM AEST
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wow so sad .
well done. |
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Re: Breaking Wood
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 08:49:19 PM AEST
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| I can definately relate. Good write!!!! |
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