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Contributed by
peacelovhppnes
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Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 10:43:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Anxiety consumes me
Thoughts racing through my mind
Wondering when it will stop...
Why must it always be you?
Haunting my dreams, invading my thoughts
Teasing me constantly
You disappear once I open my eyes
I try to say that I dont care
all the love has been washed away..
Along with my pride.
But how I feel is draining too slow
Frightful it will never all fade away.
Through times of anguish
I would turn to you
And now I wish you would erase-
Take back every kiss and word exchanged
Restore my heart back to unbreakable
I can't help but thinking back
back on the days we exchanged smiles
a moment in time frozen in my thoughts
The temperature rises....
and you're gone.
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2005-03-14 22:43:21]
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Re: You.
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by stover on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 11:29:51 PM AEST
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How could we ever go back and I can feel your anguish entwined with a dream of pure love that has been .. well... crushed.
I am sorry for that. Don't give up, there is a dream realized. |
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Re: You.
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by Mangs on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 02:03:19 PM AEST
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| amazing portrayal of your feelings...ur really talented...looking forward to reading more... |
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Re: You.
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by HerDa on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 09:12:58 AM AEST
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| Ceasless kindness of Jah will help to overcome everything in this life, even the very life! |
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Re: You.
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by brains_of_the_insane on
Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 02:57:36 PM AEST
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| I really like how you can express your emotions. I really like your stlye of writing! |
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