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Soul Mate
Contributed by
essentially9
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Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 09:54:03 PM in AEST
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Soul Mate
Tears and blood show I have a heart
Even though emotions tear it apart
You are constantly in my thoughts
And your soul is the one I've sought
But my searching for you was in vain
Because all I found was more pain
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Re: Soul Mate
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by savedbydeath on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 09:57:57 PM AEST
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awesome write homez,short and sweet,keep up the great job,love ya
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Re: Soul Mate
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by b_rand on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 10:00:27 PM AEST
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Tears and blood show I have a heart
Even though emotions tear it apart
I love that. You couldn't have phrased it better. Short and to the point. Great job. |
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Re: Soul Mate
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by HellsLibrarian on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 10:24:28 PM AEST
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| simple, but not sweet. I liked your style. Feel better. |
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Re: Soul Mate
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by ForeverAlone on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 12:22:24 AM AEST
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Ahhh....Once again your greatness strikes me, with power over words....Great job as always Jen
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Re: Soul Mate
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 06:03:46 AM AEST
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Jen i love this, it's short but the way you wrote was striking.
It's just perfect I love it...
Jane @)->--- |
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Re: Soul Mate
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by fielding88 on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 01:07:01 PM AEST
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| i've always wanted to write a poem such as this. one that's short and yet covers such a wide range of emotions. there weren't any minced words here, and you really made your point known. such raw emotions with such brevity, i'm impressed with this. Great work |
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Re: Soul Mate
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 04:09:18 PM AEST
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This is soooo good!
It leaves me a bit shaken as we all tend to think of finding our soul mate as the road to happiness. You would have thought finding the soul you seek would lead to so much pain.....yes a scary thought.
so very well done! |
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Re: Soul Mate
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by venkat on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 02:34:54 AM AEST
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Marvellous....its a master piece. and it is heart breaking.I can read it again and again:-)
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Re: Soul Mate
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by allymp on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 11:33:50 AM AEST
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so beautiful yet short
good write |
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