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Forever
Contributed by
AngelofDeath
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Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 09:49:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Its all said and done
You left me here broken
The crimson tears begin to run
And I have now fallen
My tears are pouring faster
The crimson deeped than before
You told me you'd love me forever
But that you'll just ignore
It matters to me
That it doesn't matter to you
Remember we used to be so happy
Now I know your love was never true
Copyright ©
AngelofDeath
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2005-03-14 21:49:58]
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Re: Forever
(User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 10:01:08 PM AEST
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| awesome write,i can definitly relate,just remember hang in there,many more will come ur way,keep up the great job!! |
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Re: Forever
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by Mangs on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 02:04:13 PM AEST
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| amazing write...felt every word... |
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