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Ode to the Night
Contributed by
Katie2008
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Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 08:01:48 PM in AEST
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Sparkling diamonds in the sky
Tall tree skyscrapers reach up to grab grey cotton clouds
The smell of the night consumes the living
The sky is as black as the blackest crow
The moon hangs high above the earth
Like a king upon a sparkling throne
The world goes to sleep
Until the darkness fades
Into a brand new day
The sun comes out to hide the moon
And pierces the sky
Pinks, purples, and a light color blue blend together
As the sun shines like fire
A mural in the sky
The moon must wait until the light of morning subsides to darkness
Before he can reign over the world again
Copyright ©
Katie2008
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2005-03-14 20:01:48]
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Re: Ode to the Night
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 08:10:11 PM AEST
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Love the imagery, especially th lines
"Sparkling diamonds in the sky
Tall tree skyscrapers reach up to grab grey cotton clouds"Very nicely put, and beatifully written. |
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Re: Ode to the Night
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by emystar on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 08:21:56 PM AEST
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U deserve highest grade for this beautifull write.
huggs,
emy |
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