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Godless
Contributed by
deb_lalala
on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 06:58:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Looking up at the ceiling
listening to doctors tell their lies
while silently, inside I'm screaming
with heavy tears streaming from my increasingly soul-less eyes..
I am now Godless...
I feel so much pain
cutting through my abdomen like a knife
as the pool of blood grows larger
fainter goes innocent life
I am now Godless...
All I can think is
please let me die too
if for this life inside me
I can't give anew
I am now Godless...
Forgive me Father
for I have sinned
please don't take the life within
punish me for this "supposed" sin....
I am now Godless...
Give this untouched child a chance
let me and Satan have this deadly death dance
Oh dear Lord how much more can I plead?
Don't take my baby girl away from me....
I am now Godless...
Her heartbeat grows dim
she's too tired to fight
The Lord hath commeth
to take her soul to the heavenly light....
I am now Godless...
Now I lay here
with no more tears to cry
the doctors say their sorry
as they look into my now soul-less eyes....
I am now Godless...
No more pain, no more fear
as a numbness now sets in
I lie in bed, wishing I too were dead
for committing this "supposed" sin....
I am now Godless...
I have no hope
no will for success
for my love, my soul, has been taken to rest....
I am now Godless...
So dig my grave
dig it deep
if the Lord has my soul to keep
I am now Godless
I am finished-my thinking done
I am now Godless
I had my death dance...
I am now Godless
Satan won.
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2005-03-14 18:58:28]
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Re: Godless
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by DesolantDreamer on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 07:09:37 PM AEST
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| Very good write. Full of pain and hopelessness. |
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Re: Godless
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 07:31:32 PM AEST
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| awsomely written. I love it. The description, the pain, the repitition. nicelly done!!! |
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Re: Godless
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by Tanmaya on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 01:11:20 AM AEST
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Satan comes to kill, steal and destroy, but he is a defeated enemy.
"Never will I leave you,
Never will I forsake you."
That's God's promise, and it is irrevocable.
It is we who choose to turn away, His love doesn't change.
There is no gap His love cannot fill, no pain His love cannot heal, no sin His love cannot redeem.
May you find the everlasting arms underneath.
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Re: Godless
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by SimplyMe on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 06:19:48 AM AEST
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This write sent chills not just down my spine, but through my entire body. I am soterribly sorry for your loss. I can't imiagne a pain greather then losing a child. I truely wish there were more i could say... sadly.. i can't. I loved the way you formatted this though. It was an excellent write.
~Alucia~ |
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