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MY APOLOGY TO THE WORLD
Contributed by
compton-tre-block
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Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 06:30:37 PM in AEST
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I apologize...
for not bein "All that I Can Be"
I am so sorry that
Uncle Sam did not accept me!
I apologize...
for the pain I caused your people
you told me when I was young..
that we could never be equals
I apologize...
for the thought that were here to
rape your women..and for the
thought that all black means venom
I apologize...
that my blood is red just like yours..
but in real life were just nigaz an hores!
I apologize...
for bein enslaved for 400 years!!!
Sorry for bein on the slave boat
and bein shot with them spears
I apologize...
for our poverty an how we die everyday
for our gunz and violence, no food on our trays
I apologize...
for the fact that theres drugs on the streets
skinny lil kids with no shoes on there feet
I apologize...
cuz I know Im not your color...
sorry for the question:"Cant we be brothers?"
I apologize...
that my hair is nappy an my stomach is hurtin
sorry I made this country so divertent...
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Re: MY APOLOGY TO THE WORLD
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by sweet_lil_b2003 on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 06:34:32 PM AEST
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| Hey good wriiting...it was interesting... I reli liked it ~~Crystal~~ |
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Re: MY APOLOGY TO THE WORLD
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by ForeverAlone on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 06:39:06 PM AEST
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You know what Im sorry about.....that your steriotyping your own people...sad...
Clark |
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Re: MY APOLOGY TO THE WORLD
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by RazorBladeWar on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 07:57:17 PM AEST
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| Oh My Gosh! No Body cares what color you are! im sure thats NOT why you are saying goodbye! If you ask me your more racist than white people! |
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Re: MY APOLOGY TO THE WORLD
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by emystar on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 08:16:44 PM AEST
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Mercy every one has an opinion, huh?
Good writing and I'm sorry that some folks jus wonna be ugly. Ofcourse I'm not speaking of u.
Keep writing as it's freedom of press that we all have.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: MY APOLOGY TO THE WORLD
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by savedbydeath on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 10:21:42 PM AEST
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| awesome write |
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Re: MY APOLOGY TO THE WORLD
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by SimplyMe on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 06:27:56 AM AEST
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This was an awesome write. Yet i'm still trying to understand where the negitivity is needed..... Anyways you expressed yourself very well in this poem. I enjoyed it and i don't blame you for your choice of words and such, this is how you vent. I admire that. You say what you feel. Great job. I'll be looking for more of your work.
~Alucia~ |
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Re: MY APOLOGY TO THE WORLD
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by UNORTHODOX on
Saturday, 3rd November 2012 @ 11:41:15 AM AEST
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As I read this poem, and some of the comments,
I really start to see how lost we are, as human beings.
What hurts is the people who don't;
can't understand your poem, and it's depth.
This is not negativity in the least bit, nor is it stereotyping, it's frustrastion.
This is how the world in a whole feels
( about blacks, jews, women,each other).
I loved this write. All of it is true then and now.
For all who still are in denial, just ask your self;
if you meet and man in suit and tie in a dark alley vs
a man in rags who would you trust?
Well written
-UNORTHODOX |
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