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Mirrors
Contributed by
suicidebringshappiness
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Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 06:24:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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As you peer,
Into this mirror,
With all its cracks,
and its shattered glass,
Reality is distorted,
All once fit perfect together,
Now shattered by tragity,
Befallen the purest of heart,
When will this mirror,
Become whole again,
And all be well,
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2005-03-14 18:24:17]
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Re: Mirrors
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by DesolantDreamer on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 06:34:28 PM AEST
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| wow. Very true and bittersweet. I love your name too! Anywayz I love this. It is really good! |
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Re: Mirrors
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by sweet_lil_b2003 on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 06:37:40 PM AEST
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Hey I loved the phrase "Reality is distorted,
All once fit perfect together,
Now shattered by tragity"
ITS AMAZING. ~~Crystal~~ |
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Re: Mirrors
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by b_rand on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 07:45:51 PM AEST
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| This makes for a really good metaphor. I love the idea of comparing tragedy with a shattered mirror. |
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