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Cleansing the Stains
Contributed by
DesolantDreamer
on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 06:11:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Rain falls in steady, peaceful sheets
My blood pours out in steady, peaceful relief
Mixing the two shall give me the ultimate peace
Rain cleanses the stained
May it cleanse my blood of the stains
I look to the stormy sky
Lightning dances around me
In a rythm the thunder beats out
As my blood seeps into the earth
May it remind the world of their stains
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2005-03-14 18:11:44]
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Re: Cleansing the Stains
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by sweet_lil_b2003 on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 06:41:16 PM AEST
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Just wanted to tell you I love your write...My blood pours out in steady, peaceful relief
love that part ~~Crystal~~ |
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Re: Cleansing the Stains
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by bonita2689 on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 08:51:13 PM AEST
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| This is an awesome illustration, I like the word candy and I like the lesson. Great, Job! |
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