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Entwined
Contributed by
Jane_Doe
on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 06:00:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Entwined in a universe you don't understand
Entwined in a world that pours blood on the land
Entwined in a country that wants you to bleed
Entwined in a state that deprives you of needs
Entwined in a city of regulations and rules
Entwined in a school of prejudice fools
Entwined in a household that binds you with tape
Entwined in a room that's your only escape
Entwined in a life that rips at the seams
Entwined in a moment of dreaming your dreams
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Jane_Doe
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2005-03-14 18:00:59]
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Re: Entwined
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 06:07:53 PM AEST
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This is truly a spectacular write. The repetition put that bit more force behind your words... this is really a masterpiece. I can definitely relate to some, I do have to admit that my favourite lines were:
"Entwined in a school of prejudice fools"
and perhaps
"Entwined in a room thats your only escape."
Or... well... all of them lol. Simply gorgeous. Thanks for sharing.
Take Care
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Re: Entwined
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by sweet_lil_b2003 on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 06:46:18 PM AEST
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Hey..I enjoyed this probley because I can relate to the feelings... Thanks ~~Crystal~~
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