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Exit
Contributed by
LevyMetal
on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 05:27:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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If only i could cut my lip
Hold my breath, slit and rip
My face against a can lid
I slice flesh and heal again
EMERGENCY! EVACUATE!
Grab the children, you must escape
Burning eyes and taking lives
Fire!...
Fire...
Emergency
If only i could cut and b l e e d.
Desperation...
Elevation...
Hesitation...
Annihilation..
Explosions and dynomite!
Love this razor and rape this knife
Fire!
Ashes!
Emergency
If only i could make you s e e.
Copyright ©
LevyMetal
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2005-03-14 17:27:02]
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Re: Exit
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by Daniels_Princess on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 05:30:12 PM AEST
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| All I can say is..wow..I can really relate to this..:'( |
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Re: Exit
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by allforyou on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 08:20:49 PM AEST
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"Love this razor and rape this knife"
This is my favorite part. Loved it, although I don't quite understand the part about fire.
--Kara |
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Re: Exit
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Thursday, 17th March 2005 @ 02:24:28 AM AEST
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| wow, amazing |
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Re: Exit
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by EVERxSOxSWEET on
Friday, 18th March 2005 @ 10:04:42 PM AEST
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| that was awesome, looks like it was written carefully and well thought out. |
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