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A Very Stupid Love Poem.
Contributed by
Jessica_Saini
on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 10:40:00 AM in AEST
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I saw you again today,
I have seen you,
every which way,
from serious
to silly and
from brown
eyes to belly.
This poem may sound stupid,
I’m just writing words.
I need to get some rest now,
‘cause early isn’t just for the birds.
Just thought I’d say I love you,
in poetic ways,
but now I should be sleeping,
like my muse this very day.
Copyright ©
Jessica_Saini
... [
2002-12-17 10:40:00]
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Re: A Very Stupid Love Poem.
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by Ophelia on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 10:54:49 AM AEST
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| This was actually kinda cute. You shouldn't cut down on yourself. Keep up your writing |
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Re: A Very Stupid Love Poem.
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 11:01:02 AM AEST
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I agree with Ophelia you really shouldn't cut your poetry down, you wrote this and it came from how you were feeling in your heart, no matter how the words came out it's still from your heart and it's a poem i deeply enjoyed, and i think it's a beautiful expression and way to say i love you to someone, i hope whomever you had in mind when you wrote this see's this poem because it's beautiful...
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: A Very Stupid Love Poem.
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by 15caitlin15 on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 11:34:03 AM AEST
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This is very cute. It might need some editing around the rough edges, but it's good.
Caitlin |
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Re: A Very Stupid Love Poem.
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by Jessica_Saini on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 11:44:22 AM AEST
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Thank you everyone:-D
~Jessica |
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Re: A Very Stupid Love Poem.
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by Aidan on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 05:50:03 PM AEST
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Wow, this touched me so deeply...
Okay, maybe not. :) Really though, it is cute. |
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Re: A Very Stupid Love Poem.
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by 0o_Jelly_Bean_o0 on
Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 02:46:59 AM AEST
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Very cute, Sometimes you don't have to put much thought into a poem for it to be good.. Keep up the writing...
- Ms Bean |
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Re: A Very Stupid Love Poem.
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by banjo on
Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 01:34:27 PM AEST
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| Personally I think most love poems are stupid but this is better than most. I like "brown eyes to belly" that's a good line. |
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