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Wasted Chances
Contributed by
grode
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Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 05:11:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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My life is filled with second glances,
Times when my imagination nearly dances,
I wish my heart could lead the way,
But yet I stand with the inability to go or stay,
My mind has built this giant fence,
I use it as my emotional line of defense,
Never really changing course,
Merely trudging along at minimal force,
Untill I find myself in one of my trances,
Thinking about all my wasted chances
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grode
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2005-03-14 17:11:08]
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Re: Wasted Chances
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 05:13:59 PM AEST
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Brilliant. I really like this one, its insightful, expressive, emotional and heart-wrenchingly beautiful at the same time. A work of art.
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Re: Wasted Chances
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by BloodsINK on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 05:19:38 PM AEST
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this is awsome.. i like poems that rhyme and flow and this does just that , and at the same time shows emotion .. i really enjoyed this.. sort and sweet and something i think we can all relate to at some time in our lives thanx for sharing
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Re: Wasted Chances
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by Daniels_Princess on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 05:44:42 PM AEST
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"My mind has built this giant fence,
I use it as my emotional line of defense"
I love that..I can relate to that line so much..It just kinda..made my eyes water up when I read that part..great write.. |
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Re: Wasted Chances
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 12:41:42 PM AEST
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This was so interesting and enthralling that I seriously wanted it to be longer. To just continue on......
I couldn't find a single flaw and am ecstatic to have come across this unique poem.
It also leaves the reader with something to ponder on.
Kie |
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