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You've Changed Me
Contributed by
Daniels_Princess
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Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 05:08:31 PM in AEST
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Here lately I've been changing
I've been acting kinda strange
You called me out on it
Said I'm not the same
You said it's kinda cute though
Thats not why Im like this
See, it isn't to make you laugh
That's not why Im such a *****
I'm tired of getting hurt
Im sick of getting played
I'm not your stupid toy
And my feelings aren't a game
So if you're gunna keep hurting me
Let me know right now
So I can end this all
Before I wear a frown
If you want to be with her
Don't play me for a fool
Don't tell me that you love me
Cause I'm stupid and might believe you
Im tired of cryin my tears
And calling you everynight
Im sick of hoping and
Praying to God things will be alright
You never should have told me
That you're not like other guys
You promised you'd stay
When you just said goodbye
Yeah, you're still there to "support" me
And listen when I talk
But what about wanting me, lovin me
You promised that wouldn't stop
You wonder why I've changed
When the answer is so clear
I can't even trust myself now
Don't know why I'm here
Don't know why I still love you
And I don't know why I still call
When just like all the guys from my past
You only helped me fall
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Daniels_Princess
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2005-03-14 17:08:31]
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Re: You've Changed Me
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 05:12:37 PM AEST
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This is a truly exceptional write. Its written to perfection, flows smoothly and is so heart-wrenchingly beautiful that its left me speechless. I think that the line "I''m not like other guys" has to be somewhere in the idiot-handbook, don't you think? Keep your chin up, smile, forget the gits and keep writing.
Thanks for sharing.
Take Care
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Re: You've Changed Me
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by BloodsINK on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 05:26:09 PM AEST
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*tear in my eye*
if i could lend a shoulder i would, but to comment on your poem i think saying awsome would be an understatment. its so many feelings and so much i can relatate to its amazing. i love it.. i think ive read it 3 times now.. anyway thanx so much for sharing ur feeling, and ur talent in writing
xBLOODINKx |
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Re: You've Changed Me
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by CrippinBabi513 on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 03:09:11 PM AEST
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| you just put in perfect words how I feel bout this guy ive been in love wit fo like foeva!!...GREAT WRITE~....*Babi |
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