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I Am
Contributed by
Pats4eva7
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Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 05:05:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I've finally come clean,
About the lines on my arm.
I've finally gotten help,
For my abusive self-harm.
I am so ashamed,
Of all my scars.
I am sinful and horrific,
For allowing it to get this far.
Nobody can help me,
No one sees what I see.
Nobody really knows,
How hard it is being me.
I am unpure,
I fell from God's grasp.
I know I am defected,
I know that it's a fact.
I am so unsure,
If this pain is real.
No one can explain,
About the hell I feel.
I am a mistake,
Nobody wants me anyway.
But don't you worry,
I'll be gone someday.
I hate the reminders,
I've placed upon my skin.
Nobody will tell me,
Who I am within!
Copyright ©
Pats4eva7
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2005-03-14 17:05:06]
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Re: I Am
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 05:16:40 PM AEST
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This is stunning. You had me rivated to the
spot from the very first line. I hope things
smooth out for you soon, truly exceptional
write here.
Take Care
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Re: I Am
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by BloodsINK on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 05:29:16 PM AEST
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someone with such talent should never feel as if they dont belong, ur feeling should be more expressed on paper , i enjoywe dthis right, its so strong and emotional and im sorry if life seams as it is in ur write. keep up the good work
always xBLOODINKx |
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