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All That's Been Left
Contributed by
ForeverAndADay
on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 04:24:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
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One pearl earing.
A woven bag.
A few coins in her mothers coin purse.
A couple letters from her dad.
A half empty carton of milk.
A pencil half full of lead.
A diary that has hardly been written in.
One cat that needs to be fed.
One sandal lying in the kitchen.
Those three quarters the door has been opened.
A rusty truck in her front yard.
An old dress drying and blowing in the wind.
These are all that's left of Sereny.
-DNB
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Re: All That's Been Left
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 04:46:45 PM AEST
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Very nicely done. Heart-wrenchingly sad and yet beautiful at the same time. I really like this one, its original, creavie, deep and meaningful. Very well written. Thanks for sharing.
Take Care
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Re: All That's Been Left
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by BloodsINK on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 05:39:05 PM AEST
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well writen, hard to explain really how i felt while reading this but i could see images . . and felt involved in the emotion of it , thanx for sharing
xBLOODINKx |
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Re: All That's Been Left
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by Banana_babe on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 07:06:12 PM AEST
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| good write, i can picture all of these item of my head. i am sorry for your loss. keep on writing. |
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