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Jordan

Contributed by eleventoedsloth on Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 01:12:04 PM in AEST
Topic: Nostalgic

I close my eyes softly,
And I see you.
Whole, incredible, you.
My words -
they paint the picture of your skin.
Pale and fragile,
Just like mine.
You're sweet blue veins,
they contrast
they swerve
They're my road map to your under-sized heart
(a cold place to reside, but I can make it my palace)
Your smile,
your grin,
the bar above your eye
Green or blue?
They amaze me.
I love, even your scars,
and the stories they tell.
Past loves... or past failures?
I can heal them.
I love, your hair.
And how it falls across your eyes
(blue or green?
they amaze me.)
I'm honored to hold your friendship
and your trust.
I know some would kill to be where I am...
and all I had to do was listen.
And suffer some.
Infatuation is an understatement,
But they say it's not love.
I'd merely give anything just to hold your attention
I have to say,
you mesmerize me.
Every move you make keeps me wondering
(and longing)
for what will happen next.
I know you've been damaged,
I have, too.
My bruises can prove -> I'm not all here.
He stole parts
and mangled me.
I'm just asking for you to tend to my wounds.
Simply, tell me what
I'm dieing to hear.
Whisper in my ear,
What I've only dreamt of whispering in yours.
Tell me
you're sorry.
Tell me
you want me the same.
Tell me I drive you crazy.
Tell me I'm not insane.

Copyright © eleventoedsloth ... [ 2005-03-14 13:12:04]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Jordan (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Wingz on Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 01:22:52 PM AEST
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Amazing. Your emotion is so strong and so raw and most of all beautiful. This piece shines very bright. Good work.

Krystal

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