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tension
Contributed by
gizmo
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Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 01:09:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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The screamings are increasing,
and the temperatures rising, so
what happens next,
isnt surprizing.
You must duck fast,
and move quickley,
or youll get stuck in the cross fire,
and if that happens,
youll be the flat liner.
Vaines poping, knuckls snaping,
be still or you'll be the one that gets the slaping.
Shut your mouth,
dont dare to breath.
If not, the punishment
you can't conieve.
Copyright ©
gizmo
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2005-03-14 13:09:10] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: tension
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 02:27:14 AM AEST (User
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interesting, almost comical, yet it still conveys anger in a realistic sense.. not that im a fan of anger, but your poem is well done. nice rhyme scheme too, good work..
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