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Take My Hand
Contributed by
ShaBa
on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 10:19:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Leaving trails of dead skin cells
You follow me down till the end
Like breadcrumbs through the forest
I can see the light bend
The fork in the road
I can’t pretend
I’ve made a choice
The bullet through my friend
I break through as the victor
But we all lose in the end
You’re with me
As we travel on the lights bend.
Copyright ©
ShaBa
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2005-03-14 10:19:23]
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Re: Take My Hand
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by Red_October on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 11:01:58 AM AEST
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| This is a really excellent short poem. Usually I prefer longer, more developed poetry, but this is missing nothing. Glad I stopped in to read. Tiffany J. |
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Re: Take My Hand
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by EverlastingDawn on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 11:14:52 AM AEST
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Interesting poem.
Short but sweet.
Good Write.
~Dawn |
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Re: Take My Hand
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by ShaBa on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 11:39:22 AM AEST
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| thanks guys, Its comments like that, that allow me to keep writing. |
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