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With A Sign That Reads ''THE MOST UNFORGIVING PLACE EVER''
Contributed by
eleventoedsloth
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Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 10:04:43 AM in AEST
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I walk the remaining steps to the car.
I dont want to go, but I keep my cool.
I complain about ariving on time
But it's a ploy. I wouldnt be disapointed if we
just didnt show.
We stop abruptly,
Someone's pulledout in front of my
Funeral Ride
and we just barly miss them.
I'm startled, but silently wishing they hit us.
And paralized me.
At least then, I wouldnt have to go.
But they didnt hit us ... and I do go.
We swirve into the driveway
and I start my walk into:
'THE MOST UNFORGIVING PLACE EVER'
or, at least, I think that's what the sign said.
The next two days could determin my next three (and a half) years.
I pray they all forget my face
-and my name.
PLEASE.
Forget you know who I was.
That's not who I am now.
Copyright ©
eleventoedsloth
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2005-03-14 10:04:43]
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Re: With A Sign That Reads ''THE MOST UNFORGIVING PLACE EVER''
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by EverlastingDawn on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 10:14:01 AM AEST
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| Great poem, full of deep seeded emotions. Good Write. |
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Re: With A Sign That Reads ''THE MOST UNFORGIVING PLACE EVER''
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by Red_October on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 11:14:17 AM AEST
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| so much so that we could never fully understand. this is much indulged and bled out for you. really nice write...Tiffany J. |
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Re: With A Sign That Reads ''THE MOST UNFORGIVING PLACE EVER''
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by Archie on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 07:54:45 PM AEST
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| Wow! You did a good job on this one. I can relate to it very well and from a personal stand point. All the people who tormented me during my youth want me near them now so i can comfort them, but i live far away. |
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Re: With A Sign That Reads ''THE MOST UNFORGIVING PLACE EVER''
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by Drapes on
Friday, 10th March 2006 @ 10:13:18 PM AEST
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Wow, that's soo good! I really liked it! Great write!
-Drapes |
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