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BloodINK
Contributed by
BloodsINK
on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 04:50:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I Feel This Feeling
Feels Like Ice,
Cold At Heart,
And Now Im Thinking Twice.
A Knife From The Draw,
Seams To Be Callin
So Im Down On All Four's And Im Crawling
Pickin It Up, Hold It Tightly To My Wrist,
Just A Quick Slip, With A Little Twist,
Watch My Life Spill Before Me,
Start To Cry, Im Sorry Angie Please Dun Cry
My Daughter And Wife Are Still Sleepin
And Im Laying Dieing, Softly Weaping,
I Try To Write This Note, Blood Ink Its True
Dear Angie,And My Baby Girl
Ill Be Lookin Up From Hell,
Looking Under You, Gods Not Gonna Accept Me
For Who I Am, But Im Gonna Love You Both
Right Till The End,
Im Fading Softly, Hoping To Die Quick,
And My Visions Blurry, Seening Clouds Thick,
Staring At The Kitchen Door,
A Figure I See, Staring Crying Down At Me
A Scream From Her Lungs , Fallings To Both Knees.
Im Sorry Angie Forgive Me..Please
Copyright ©
BloodsINK
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2005-03-14 04:50:08]
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Re: BloodINK
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by acidicblasphemy on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 11:41:13 AM AEST
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Very emotional write. I loved it. Keep it up.
-BuTToN- |
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Re: BloodINK
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by Dying_Angel on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 05:48:18 PM AEST
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| *sniffles* wow...aw its soo sad...keep writing like that, but okay here's some constructive critism: if your dyslexic you can still do this cos I am and i can...you write your poem on word and copy it onto here...it gets rid of spelling mistakes and makes the presentation better. xx |
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Re: BloodINK
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by Dying_Angel on
Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 05:48:54 PM AEST
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| *sniffles* wow...aw its soo sad...keep writing like that, but okay here's some constructive critism: if your dyslexic you can still do this cos I am and i can...you write your poem on word and copy it onto here...it gets rid of spelling mistakes and makes the presentation better. xx |
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