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A Love At First Sight
Contributed by
BENiAM
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Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 12:17:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Would you wear it on your sleeve?
This dearest part of which you cleave
Then how is love at first sight real?
That you’d allow another to steal
In a moment faster than a wink
Your promise of an unbreakable link
Will it have the same pain in loss?
Because it’s given without a cause
Or will it simply be exchanged?
For the next person that’s in range
Copyright ©
BENiAM
... [
2005-03-14 00:17:38]
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Re: A Love At First Sight
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 01:19:19 AM AEST
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Aww this was really writen well, i dont think it was romantic thought * shrugs*
Anyways i really liked this write. Keep writing.
Hugs,
Jane ^_^ |
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Re: A Love At First Sight
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by ButchCorpuz on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 01:30:32 AM AEST
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Nice poem. Keep it up!
-Butch |
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