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What keeping you:
Contributed by
RICHARD_CAMPBELL
on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 10:34:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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What holding u back?
why won't u attact?
what is your prolbem jack?
people are not whats wrong
with u.
u're and you blame others
too.
your failure to grow
is nothing new.
your like a mole that just grew.
complaining about this,
and compliaining about that.
when your the problem ,
who won't fighting back.
so here is my solutation to u
jack ,"u are lazy,
how about that."
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RICHARD_CAMPBELL
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2005-03-13 22:34:51]
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Re: What keeping you:
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by emystar on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 12:46:44 AM AEST
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Well semetimes it's hard to get going. A person will get further with encouragement or at least that's my oppinion.
huggs,
emy
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Re: What keeping you:
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by greeneyes on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 10:38:56 PM AEST
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Interesting thoughts on this, people who complain find fault with others.
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