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Wrist to Wrist
Contributed by
Deleterious_dislike
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Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 06:21:51 PM in AEST
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I pear down, stare, awe over this galliant physique.
I flourish, I gaze, my lips grace your sweet cheek.
I seek for the taste, the angel bred skin.
I find and embrace, a race and I win.
There's a clamor, a scream in the soul of our passion.
As our bodies entwine in a heated great fashion.
And so I smile with more than heaven sent joy,
I undress you, caress you, let passion deploy.
It feels asthough heaven has rained,
we're soaked in this love now forever we're chained.
Eternity has blessed us and granted us life,
promised us death, bound us man and wife.
Always we'll be; all days we'll spend.
Loving each other, never meeting the end.
Forever we'll gaze, eternity kissed.
Caught up in pink haze, bound tight wrist to wrist.
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Re: Wrist to Wrist
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by fielding88 on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 06:32:35 PM AEST
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| loved how u incorporated the title here. The most ingenious part of this poem has to be the fourth stanza, which seems as if it was simply insipired. Great stuff |
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Re: Wrist to Wrist
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by Scarlett on
Thursday, 24th March 2005 @ 04:30:00 AM AEST
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good to see you have not lost your flair.
the rhyme is flawless, full of unique images and so different, as always.
refreshing to read some stuff of yours again, your style is so distinctive. have been having trouble getting on the site so deleted my page and started again.
hope you're well |
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