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Missing You
Contributed by
AnimePoet00
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Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 05:02:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Lying in my bed,
With thoughts,
Of you,
Running through my head.
Missing you,
Yearning for you,
Wanting you.
I'm all alone,
Wishing I was somewhere else,
With you,
Somewhere wed call home.
We could live happily together,
For always and forever.
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AnimePoet00
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2005-03-13 17:02:09]
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Re: Missing You
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by sweet_lil_b2003 on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 05:04:19 PM AEST
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Sound great..your poem..love the way it fits together
~~Crystal~~ |
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Re: Missing You
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by EverlastingDawn on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 09:32:11 AM AEST
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| Good poem. It's short, but sweet. It flows well, making it easier to read, unlike some other poems. Though, you might want to change wed to would. Other than that it's a great poem. Nice Write. |
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