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Everything, I want from you.....
Contributed by
ravisada
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Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 06:49:28 AM in AEST
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LovePoetry
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Many nights, many dreams
brings me nothing but scream
Feels so lonely and dull without you
Want to laugh, want to smile
and want to walk many miles with you
Want to kiss your lips, want to hug you
and want to display my devotion on you
Want to steal your heart and
Want to play with your love
Want to promise my soul never to be part
Want to tell you how much I love you
and how much you are mean to me.
Yes, everything I want from you
Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
Copyright @2005 Ravi Sathasivam
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ravisada
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2005-03-13 06:49:28]
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Re: Everything, I want from you.....
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by glu1 on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 06:51:54 AM AEST
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| brilliant. we've all been there. something we can all relate to |
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Re: Everything, I want from you.....
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by emystar on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 06:52:33 AM AEST
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Very beautifull write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Everything, I want from you.....
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 06:58:23 AM AEST
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Aww this was such a lovely lovely write, i miss the feeling on being inlove *sighs*
Anyways i really liked this, keep up the good work.
Jane ^_^ |
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Re: Everything, I want from you.....
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by Rhymingron on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 08:28:51 AM AEST
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| A very nice poem. I really enjoyed reading it. |
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Re: Everything, I want from you.....
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by midnightrose on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 08:56:58 AM AEST
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i love it......i wish i had someone to love me....anyway good work!
Melanie ^_~ |
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Re: Everything, I want from you.....
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by breny on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 04:31:57 PM AEST
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awww this is so sweet! good write! :-D
~Brenna~ |
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