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Day Dreamer
Contributed by
blueheart
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Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:19:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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Day dreams magnified in her smiles,
She dwells in the silent escapade from reality,
Where the borders are blurred,
And characters are misty eyed,
The dialogues well rehearsed,
Yet conversations are unclear,
The body is numb for the moment,
While the mind races between,
Reality and the frail outline of visions.
But her silver frame cracks,
When breezes of realistic hues,
Sweep across and breaks her bridges,
That links her to heavenly freedom,
And her dreams are left untouched,
Till her concentration sways again.
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blueheart
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2005-03-13 03:19:13]
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Re: Day Dreamer
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by Broken_Wingz on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:21:25 AM AEST
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Great write. This was an awesome poem. Keep up the good work.
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Re: Day Dreamer
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:30:10 AM AEST
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oh, this is excellent, beautifully written:) ...im a day dreamer and a night dreamer as i stay up late so much lol, hope all is well by you:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Day Dreamer
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by emystar on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 04:24:31 AM AEST
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I agree, very good work.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Day Dreamer
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 07:00:07 AM AEST
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Ohh this was outstanding, great poem.
I really enjoyed reading it.
Keep up the good work.
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Re: Day Dreamer
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by Baronhawk on
Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 03:48:40 AM AEST
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| A quaint write on a very quaint subject. I like the analogy a lot for I too am a day dreamer par excellance. You have captured well here the fleeting but satisfying feel of sweet sweet daydreams. A nice write. |
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