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Thank You
Contributed by
broken_wingz
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Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:11:28 AM in AEST
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It happened by chance
on that fateful night,
My life was changed
in a flash of light.
I opened my heart
and let you in,
Now with these lines
my story begins.
You were a miracle
that was sent to me,
The light in my life
so I could see.
You taught me to love
and showed me how to feel,
You gave my life meaning
and made it real.
You accepted my flaws
and all that is me,
You opened my heart
and set my soul free.
I always thought I knew it all,
everthing and more.
But with you by my side
I had someone else to live for.
In my eye is the sparkle of love
the chance to being anew,
I see things through a child's eyes
with a much clearer view.
Although we are no longer together
my heart remains the same.
You made me who I am today
and I thank you for that change.
Copyright ©
broken_wingz
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2005-03-13 03:11:28]
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Re: Thank You
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by xtremcalibur on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:36:26 AM AEST
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| Perfect and beatifully said. Thank you for sharing |
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Re: Thank You
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 07:05:24 AM AEST
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Thank you for sharing this one, I could totally relate to everything this poem stands for. Isin't it amazing on how many of us out there feel the same feelings each day.
Anyways i loved this one, it made me think about the love i lost a while ago.
Keep up the good work.
Jane @)->--- |
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Re: Thank You
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by Rhymingron on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 08:49:00 AM AEST
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| This is really good. You express your feelings so well and the flow makes it such a pleasure to read. |
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Re: Thank You
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by sweet_lil_b2003 on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:35:33 PM AEST
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I loved you poem. your words fit together like everuything in life. You are a amazing writter
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Re: Thank You
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by sweetncaring on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 12:15:12 PM AEST
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| Very Very well written. I like it a lot. |
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