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No need to see tomorrow
Contributed by
JennyFruFru
on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 02:50:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Can you tell me what is wrong with me?
Please tell me how I FEEL
going on with each waking moment
that goes way beyond my will
Im so lonely in this universe
so lonely ... dont you know
That even the most smallest things
turn and let me go
No one understands me
and no one knows just what is right
and we all fight about the petty things
things that should be kept out of ... our sight
i cant wait until my angels come
and grasp this weary soul
please take me from this dready place
the place that i now call home
what is wrong with me i wonder
but yet i do not know
my tears are just a little thing
that keeps carrying my poor soul
i have no more answers
only this one simple wish
please forget me when i leave here
and understand that i want this
this world is better off without me
i seem to cause not any good
instead my thoughts have crushed all the beauty i was shown
Please forgive me when I leave here
this is my only dying wish
just toss me in the ocean
and forget that I exist....
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JennyFruFru
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2005-03-13 02:50:00]
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Re: No need to see tomorrow
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by emystar on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 02:58:27 AM AEST
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Oh me girl, don't know what to say bout this one. We all get tired from time to time but please don't give up.
This place here would be very sad without u.
I will pray for u to feel better soon.
We luv u.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, prayer,
emy |
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Re: No need to see tomorrow
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 07:07:38 AM AEST
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What an emotive write, i really enjoyed this write. I'm sorry if you're going through this.
Please forgive me when I leave here
this is my only dying wish
just toss me in the ocean
and forget that I exist....
Those lines just stood out from the rest of the poem.
Jane ^_^ |
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Re: No need to see tomorrow
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by Rhymingron on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 08:58:12 AM AEST
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| This is so beautifully done. If this is you, you probabably don't realize what you have to offer. This beautiful poem, for example, came from a very talented person. What a shame if it weren't shared. |
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Re: No need to see tomorrow
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by Mangs on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 12:38:24 PM AEST
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| i know what it feels like....... |
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