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Don't Tell Me It's Not Hard
Contributed by
Pats4eva7
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Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 12:50:21 AM in AEST
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Its hard to feel wanted,
Its hard to want this life.
Damn, its even harder,
To put down the knife.
Dont tell me you love me,
Dont tell me you care.
Dont tell me that,
You spend your time wishing i was there.
Its hard to breathe,
Its hard not to cry.
Believe me, its even harder,
To not wanna die.
Dont tell me i matter,
Dont tell me i belong.
Dont you dare,
Tell me that im wrong.
Its hard to explain,
Please dont make me try.
Its bad enough,
That i wanna die.
Dont tell me its not hard,
That just isnt true.
If you were in my position,
You too, wouldnt know what to do.
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Pats4eva7
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2005-03-13 00:50:21]
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Re: Don't Tell Me It's Not Hard
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 01:01:32 AM AEST
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okay, i wont tell you any of those things, but i will say this is a beautiful expression of feelings and a poem of well woven words:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Don't Tell Me It's Not Hard
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by emystar on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 02:38:19 AM AEST
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Great writing.
Maybe u should try-n-talk about it.
luv, huggs, prayers,
emy |
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Re: Don't Tell Me It's Not Hard
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 07:15:05 AM AEST
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WOW!!! this was brilliant, very good writing and i love the overall flow and pattern of the poem.
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Re: Don't Tell Me It's Not Hard
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by sweet_lil_b2003 on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:45:05 PM AEST
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I just read your poem and well I reli though it was awsome and all but, I hope you dont wana die. your Prolly a amazing person and if you ever need a friend im around. ~~Crystal~~
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Re: Don't Tell Me It's Not Hard
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by EverlastingDawn on
Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 10:10:38 AM AEST
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| Great poem, it's truely amazing. Full of deep feelings, and emotions. Great Write. |
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