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Addiction
Contributed by
Pats4eva7
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Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:22:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My ecstasy is no one but you,
Convincing me these visions are true.
When im with you im on a natural high,
But soon the serenity goes awry.
Your flaming soul fades away,
Defenseless on the ground I lay.
Why has this feeling so quickly faded?
My thoughts are tortured, my soul is jaded.
The answer is im simply addicted,
Why are my dreams so dark and twisted?
they are so because of you,
Your smile so sweet and your eyes so blue.
Stich up this wound that seems to never end,
Give me a cure and help me mend.
I feel the drugs seep through my skin,
Then pours back out; oozing from within.
Oneday I pray for a cure,
Maybe oneday I wont need you anymore.
I wont need you as my natural high,
I'll smile and wave you off goodbye.
Copyright ©
Pats4eva7
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2005-03-12 23:22:26]
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Re: Addiction
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by Rottenrioter on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:34:01 PM AEST
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| great write...reminds me of my addictions...love one of the greatest of all but also one of the most deadly |
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Re: Addiction
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by DesolantDreamer on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:41:56 PM AEST
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Very true and good. I know the feeling of addiction too. I think this is a great write! Good job!
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Re: Addiction
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:10:47 PM AEST
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Well written. Honest and to the point addiction is a cruel burden .
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