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Single Flame
Contributed by
Pats4eva7
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Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:18:36 PM in AEST
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In my heart there's a single flame,
Nobody knows it, it has no name.
She stands there all alone,
Though she's lit, she's chilled to the bone.
She flails with the wind, dancing in the dark,
In the vast blackness she's just a single spark.
She stands alone, a single flame,
Her wild fire no man can tame.
Her fire burns but her wax begins to melt,
For each drop represents a tear she's felt.
The fire is gone, the light shines dim,
Though her flame still burns within.
Standing alone still, with no more flame,
Even though its all the same.
The remaining smoke starts to rise,
But blown away by deceit and lies.
The remains are still hot, the wax still singes,
The pain still hurts, my heart still cringes.
Once upon a time there was a lone flame,
For nobody knew her, she had no name.
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Pats4eva7
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2005-03-12 23:18:36]
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Re: Single Flame
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by _myonlyone_ on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:21:59 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed reading this. I like the way you incorporated part of the beginning into the ending. Great write!
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Re: Single Flame
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by DesolantDreamer on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:22:58 PM AEST
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very nice and very deep. I like it alot...good job.
*~~*~~*~~*
May your wings carry your dreams to you
-Tsubaki |
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Re: Single Flame
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by LoneWolf07 on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:39:00 PM AEST
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| In my short time of writing/reading poetry... I believe this is the BEST poem that I have ever read... Great Job |
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Re: Single Flame
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by emystar on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 04:51:22 AM AEST
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Very unique write.
Awesome.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Single Flame
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 07:20:34 AM AEST
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This was just outstanding, very nicely writen.
I enjoyed this creative poem a lot.
Hugs,
Jane xxx |
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