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Evanescent Dreams
Contributed by
essentially9
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Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:09:31 PM in AEST
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Evanescent Dreams
Shadowed by my constant fears
In the darkness of drenching tears
As all the glimmer of light fades
With my dreams that've gone away.
The evanescent whispers of dreams
Are eclipsed like the sun's beams
As all hope eludes me on raven's wings
Nevermore to bring
The dreams that I lived for,
Because they are nothing more
Than the delusions of before
...Evermore...
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2005-03-12 23:09:31]
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Re: Evanescent Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:12:48 PM AEST
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| darkishly pretty. Bringing in nevermore and the raven was craftilly niffty. nice job.!! |
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Re: Evanescent Dreams
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by ForeverAlone on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:26:39 PM AEST
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Quote the raven: nevermore.....yes good Job Jen....hmph...as always...oh..I liked the shortness
Clark |
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Re: Evanescent Dreams
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:30:16 PM AEST
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excellent images, beautifully written poem:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Evanescent Dreams
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by emystar on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 04:34:07 AM AEST
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Great writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Evanescent Dreams
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 07:21:46 AM AEST
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Jen this was so dark and pretty. You really have done something so wonderful and amazing that i wish i could write as good as you.
Anyways i really liked this, i should read more of your poems from now on.
Hugs,
Jane xxx |
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Re: Evanescent Dreams
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 09:22:52 AM AEST
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| yes,excellent |
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Re: Evanescent Dreams
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:22:10 PM AEST
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| So sad. So elegantly written. Very good write Jennifer. Thankyou for sharing. Peace. Laura |
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Re: Evanescent Dreams
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 08:05:16 PM AEST
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WOW!! What a difference just since March...I had to check this one out, as the title was your current 'location' last time I checked...lol I like this write actually, it's a little choppy. The awesome expression and choice wording makes up for it though...You were most definitely made for writing : )
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