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Still
Contributed by
LoneWolf07
on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 09:11:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I think of us
Then I dump the clutch
My heart skips a beat
As she points me skyward
It all seems surreal
Everything is so clear
Even at such a blurry pace
I was blind to your feelings
I was stupid to your games
And I completely missed the signs
But once I crashed... It was there
In the fog, in the smoke
You... And Him
It dosen't seem right
All my time for nothing
And you want to be friends
Still
And you want to have my trust
Still
But it will never go back
back to what it was before
Too much has changed
And the gas is used up
I think of us
Then I dump the clutch
My heart skips a beat
As I pass your house
Memories cloud my vision
But I catch another gear
And drive blindly into the dark
Copyright ©
LoneWolf07
... [
2005-03-12 21:11:43]
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Re: Still
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 10:22:17 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings, warm welcome to ypdc too:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Still
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by mina-1 on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 10:29:13 PM AEST
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a sad, but very well written piece of poetry.
The worst bit of it is when it's with your best friend. Chin up, all the best to u |
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Re: Still
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by emystar on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 05:46:19 AM AEST
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I agree it's sad but yet a great write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Still
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 07:27:22 AM AEST
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Aww im so sorry you had to go through this.
This was nicely writen i liked the flow of the overall poem. It's really good.
Hugs,
Jane xxx |
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