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Within, without
Contributed by
Kellros
on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 05:31:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Lying on a cold bed without sheets,
i stare into darkness where my heart bleeds,
a breeze passes through the room with no windows,
with a silent scream which embrassed masses.
Truth pierces through lies,
to reveal the secrets of spies,
hollow sounds to the name,
as flesh to the pain.
Silence made these ears deaf,
darkness made these eyes blind,
coldness made this flesh numb,
the mind made this tongue lie,
I made this body die
Copyright ©
Kellros
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2005-03-12 17:31:59]
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Re: Within, without
(User Rating: 1 )
by DesolantDreamer on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 06:39:26 PM AEST
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| wow. Very deep. I like this write |
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Re: Within, without
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 08:46:08 PM AEST
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Wow this was awesome slightly confusing,
but when I read it out loud it made more
sense. The flow was awesome and the first
stanza was just flat out rad... wow yeah good
poem there I am glad I read this.
Bobo (Joel) |
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