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the street that never ends
Contributed by
whispered_cries
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Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 04:52:56 PM in AEST
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i'm walking down the street that never ends..here alone..by myself.. not even friends...deserted on a road to nowhere...not knowing what i want.. and it might cost me everything i've got...i have to find a path that leads me somewhere new...somewhere where i can go to find the truth...to find the answer of who i am..to find the real me..not a lie of what people want me to be...maybe i'll find that path..someday..somehow..but until i do you can find me on the street that never ends for now
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Re: the street that never ends
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by fielding88 on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 05:07:58 PM AEST
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| heh...i liked this one a lot. i said 'heh' jus cause it was in the same vein as a poem i've written myself, and came to the same conclusions. great minds think alike : ) I really loved the sense of self-searching and the metaphor you've used to describe yourself. Great stuff, keep it up! |
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Re: the street that never ends
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by Kellros on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 05:17:34 PM AEST
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| interesting write |
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Re: the street that never ends
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by crickle on
Tuesday, 15th March 2005 @ 10:19:07 AM AEST
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| i don't think the journey ever ends until we die. We will always be walking a road with questions on whether its the right road. As the metaphor goes 'the grass is always greener on the other side' . To be honest though I don't think it is. Just be true to who you are and you will be on the right road and at one within yourself. |
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