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Does He Notice
Contributed by
DistortedSuicide
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Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Does he even notice me,creeping along the wall?
Does he even notice me,or notice not at all?
Does he even notice me,even though I'm there?
Does he even notice me,or does he even care?
Does he even notice me,with that rope around my neck?
Does he even notice me,notice that I'm a wreck?
Does he even notice that I love him,or is he just like all the other men?!
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Re: Does He Notice
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 09:49:55 AM AEST
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I can relate to this poem somewhat but where it says does he even notice me, with that rope around my neck? If he doesnt notice you at that point i dont think he's really going to.....but tha's my thoughts.....thanks for sharing this one it brought back some memories for me...
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Re: Does He Notice
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by frozensuicide on
Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 01:08:08 AM AEST
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| make him notice you. kick his ass! |
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