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Death will Come
Contributed by
Anti_social
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Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 02:06:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Death will come for me if
I wait kiss my
*** to all who hate
For those who hate
the curse has arose,
and your the ****** bait
It's a curse of evil,
a curse of darkness
It seepes you from benath
so all can see you
Your dyin' and it serves you right
for being a ****** muliputive
bastard, and causing me all this pain
Your ganna die and go to HELL
and old friend I'll see yoy there with
a sword in hand and my heart in the other.
See you in HEll old Friend.
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Re: Death will Come
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by ForeverAlone on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 02:55:46 PM AEST
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I like the first stanza alot....the whole poem would have been better if you would have structured it all properly...
Death will come for me,
If I wait.
Kiss my *** to all who hate!
Like that...its easier to read
but overall I enjoyed reading it....Check your spelling a tad bit more...
Good job and I hope to read more of your work. =]
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Re: Death will Come
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by Whisper on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 03:36:20 PM AEST
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Wow this is a really forever angry write. Gee your write Drrr Ripes of hate . So what is the issue you are raising up in the write? Who's the **** bastard thing . Wow its a curious angry write.
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Re: Death will Come
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by edwynne on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 07:56:07 AM AEST
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| angry, dark, keep one writing |
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