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Dark Future
Contributed by
rottenrioter
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Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 12:01:46 PM in AEST
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There's no point in anything anymore
The more I puch myself the more I fail
What's the point of going on?
When the future looks so dark and un promising of a positive thing?
I see nothing worthy of me holding on to
What's the point when everyone calls you a failure and youre worth nothing ?
I dont see it
I let go
So, I let go of everything I thought I knew
My friends and loved ones
All slowly stary drifting away in the Black Sea that lies ahead
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2005-03-12 12:01:46]
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Re: Dark Future
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 01:44:50 PM AEST
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| I can really relate to your poem, when you feel like everyday just keeps getting worse and worse and there is no point of moving on. Just 2 let you know, your not alone |
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Re: Dark Future
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by sweet_lil_b2003 on
Sunday, 13th March 2005 @ 10:12:40 PM AEST
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hey I feel like this every waking day! nothing changes or gets better if anything things get worse for me..your not alone I feel it to. the lonilness of desire ~~CRYSTAL~~
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Re: Dark Future
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by edwynne on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 07:40:20 AM AEST
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| nice an dark, good one |
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