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promise
Contributed by
princesspurty
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Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 05:20:00 AM in AEST
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LovePoetry
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I'll never let my soul escape me without loving you first in this life
a chance like this only comes once in a lifetime
all the pain inside i feel when your not around is beyond the blade of a knife
a chance like this only counts when you make the time
control can be lost just when your near
feelings are hard to hide i fear
knowing you want the same makes me change my point of veiw
alone nomore, looking ahead to the new
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2002-12-17 05:20:00]
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Re: promise
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by OreO on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 09:43:30 AM AEST
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It's true feelings are very hard to hide...but then again it depends on what feelings were talking about....this is a beautiful write...i enjoyed reading it...i love the first line of the entire poem....i'll never let my soul escape me without loving you first in this life....absolutely beautiful.....
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Re: promise
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 17th December 2002 @ 10:02:31 AM AEST
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| This short peice had so much meaning into it,I really liked it! Christina |
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