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Exiled Heart
Contributed by
poisonpen00ad
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Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 02:28:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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My heart is in exile because I cant touch you.
My spirit weeps from the anguish of our separation.
My soul is in torment because I can’t see the light you bring to this dark world.
My strength wanes because we are out of touch.
My heart withers with each passing moment away from you.
My entire being searches for the answer to our cruel fate.
My life is nothing without you.
Copyright ©
poisonpen00ad
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2005-03-12 02:28:10]
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Re: Exiled Heart
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by mina-1 on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 05:57:06 AM AEST
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| A sad and heartfelt write. Expressed so deeply and well. A very sad, but great write. |
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Re: Exiled Heart
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by Rhymingron on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 07:54:56 AM AEST
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| Very sad. Beautifully written. |
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Re: Exiled Heart
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 08:02:14 AM AEST
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Ooooh, I really like this one.
The length is good too, I normally like longer poems, but this just says everything and gives it to you as it is.
Great write, but so very sad,
I hope things are better for you soon.
*hugs* Phil xxxx |
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Re: Exiled Heart
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by Pats4eva7 on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:38:07 AM AEST
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i lyk this poem alot...keep it up!
~*~melyssa~*~ |
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Re: Exiled Heart
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 12th March 2005 @ 11:48:27 PM AEST
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sadly exquisite, hauntingly beautiful, hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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